Rage against the dying of the Light

Wanted to do a painting of Eris Morn from Destiny. I decided to paint the scene of her in the Hive mines on the Moon as she loses her light in order to survive. Critiques and comments are greatly appreciated! Title taken from the poem "Do not go gentle into that good night" by Dylan Thomas, I've always through that poem fit the universe of Destiny very well.
I don't normally do fan art but I had a lot o fun doing this so I may do more soon. Let me know what you guys think. Edited to a lighter version